BFOI R5 Set 4 - Snow day

Sometimes being cold is okay, too.

Set 1: fav.me/d7ob24g
Set 2: fav.me/d7ob2rl
Set 3: fav.me/d7ob3jd
Set 4: You're here

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A thought occurred to me while I was thumbnailing out this round: I've been trying hard to improve my art, but what about my writing? I know that I've been cutting out a lot of things for the sake of not having to draw 1000 more panels every round.
I also know that the average information density in my writing isn't very high. I always have trouble focusing on more than 1 character at a time... There's also the fact that I write, I tend to naturally fall into the pattern of Intro -> Build-up -> Climax -> Wrap-up (If you look at my R2, you can see exactly what I'm talking about.)

But are all of these good things? Bad things? With drawing, I can usually tell when I've screwed up, even if I can't figure out how to fix it. But with writing, I'm privy to so much background information that I can tell exactly why a character is doing something... but have I given enough information to the audience so that they can, too?

How do you improve something like writing anyway?

Bluhghhgh guhr bglrugh

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LIMITED PALETTE TIME means composition experimentation time! Some of these turned out a lot better than the others, haha... 

Stray thoughts:
- OH GOD I FINISHED IN TIME ;A; ;A; ;A; gonna head straight to bed after I finish uploading these...
- I didn't realize how much I was using coloring to make up for my lazy linework until now. It's only during this round did I realize that I usually never do lineart for backgrounds, haha...
- Whatever I was thinking while I was designing Tom, it was wrong. Tom has like, the most generic silhouette ever.

Humans:
Tom - fav.me/d5cc2vo
Razz the NPC Ranger is yelling at Tom to stop playing on the roof, it's dangerous!!